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Argument:
The following was posted on an Internet real estate discussion site.

"Of the two leading real estate firms in our town�Adams Realty and Fitch Realty�Adams is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents. In contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch, and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago, I listed my home with Fitch and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams."

Essay
The given argument highlights the superiority of Adams Realty over Fitch Realty and the claim is supported with the help of three major points. The first one is the difference in the number of real estate agents employed by each of the real estate firms. The second evidence is the difference in the revenues and home sales of both the real estate firms. The third evidence is the writer�s own experience in selling his home. The succeeding paragraphs analyze each of these three points to evaluate them for their suitability as relevant proofs in terms of the claim being made by the writer that Adams Realty is clearly superior to Fitch Realty and thus one should approach Adams Realty if one wants to sell his home quickly at a good price.

The major flaw in the argument is that the author has not clearly specified the aspect of superiority that Adams Realty has with respect to Fitch Realty. The argument could have been presented in a better manner if the writer had specified as to whether the superiority being attributed to Adams Realty is by virtue of its profit making records or its statistics with respect to the number of real estate agents and the revenue incurred annually. In either of the cases, none of them would have sufficed as adequate reasons for stating that Adams Realty would be able to sell a house quickly and at a good price. In view of the above, the first two points brought out by the writer in support of his claim fall short of doing the needful. If we are considering the superiority in terms of professional competence, then the number of real estate agents that a company has is irrelevant. The expertise of a firm in carrying out the task undertaken by it cannot be judged by the size of its employees in numbers as the quality of services rendered is not dependant on the number of its employees. If the superiority is being considered in terms of the annual turnover, then Adams Realty does stand out as a superior firm as compared to Fitch Realty. However, this does not suffice as sufficient evidence to draw the conclusion that Adams Realty will be able to sell a house quickly and at a good price.

The third evidence provided by the writer is the weakest link in the argument. Firstly, the example quoted by the writer refers to an incident that took place 10 years ago and by no means can it be related to the situation in the present time. Secondly, the location and the condition of the second house that was sold by the author would have played a significant role in selling it within a month at a good price. The argument is substantially weakened by the fact that the locations and conditions of the two houses that are being used to highlight the third evidence have not been stated. The claim would have been adequately supported had both the houses been in the same location and in the same condition. A buyer may be willing to pay a higher price for a house provided it is situated at a location that suits him or if the house happens to be in a very good state. It is not necessary that this may be the same case with most of the other houses as well. Therefore, the generic claim that one should go to Adams Realty for selling houses quickly at a good price is not convincing as the argument has failed to present solid evidence in its support.

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